I ran as fast as I could over the path that meandered
through the bushes. I tried to keep quiet, but it was hard because the ground
was covered in dried leaves. I rounded the corner and suddenly the road
diverged. I quickly scanned both options to see what would be the best road to
take. The road to the left sloped downhill and continued through a well-lit
park with very little high vegetation. The other road went behind a row of
sheds; high trees overhanging the road from the other side. The darkness made
it hard to see how it continued much further than fifty meters. Almost by
instinct I went for the road on the left. The light combined with the fact that
there were very few bushes would mean exposure, but it would also mean that I
would be able to see my pursuers coming.
I sprinted downhill, careful not to step into one of the
many holes. It had been raining the past few days and that had made the path
very slippery and the traces left by the water made it very uneven. I had to
slow down to keep myself from falling. It took a while before the road was
level again. I looked down to see where I planted my feet and by the time
running no longer proved dangerous and I was able to look up again, I realized
I had made a mistake. I should have gone the other direction. If I would
continue this way I would certainly get caught. My pursuers were in view again
and they were very close behind. Clearly they were familiar with the area and
had taken a different route, because one of them I saw come running over the field
to my left. I wanted my feet to go faster, but as hard as I tried I could not
make them.
I looked around to see if there was any way to escape. Ahead
and to the right the road just continued and did not lead to any place that could
mean safety. To the far left of the park there seemed to be a road leading into
a small neighborhood where I surely would be able to shake off my pursuers. The
problem, however, was that the guy on the grass, who was closest behind me,
might be able to cut me off it he anticipated my move. There was no other way,
it was my only option so I had to take it. For a while I continued straight on
the road, not looking back because I was afraid of what I would see and my fear
would only paralyze me. When I finally turned to the left, off of the road and
through the flower beds, I could see that the guy behind me was still far away
enough. For a minute I got my hopes up, but they were literally slammed to the
ground when somebody crashed into me. I fell hard, my face pressed down. I did not
have a lot of space to move, I could just turn around my head and look upon my captors
face. Somehow he seemed familiar, but I could not recall where I had seen him
before.
The guy who was holding me down waited for the others to
join him. I was afraid for what might happen. When they arrived they surrounded
us, making sure I would not escape again. One of them crouched down next to me. He reached out to me and I flinched. I kicked my captor and tried to get free. ‘Calm
down Em’, the guy next to us said. ‘You forgot to take your meds, that’s why
your freaking out. Let’s go home and I’ll give them to you. I promise you that
you will feel a lot better’.
You write very well and this was an interesting short story! I hope your writing continues to go this well in the future as well ^.^ It's a shame that the formatting was a bit off in the paragraphs, but otherwise all good!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your feedback! Since English is not my native language it is a bit daunting to post stories or poems, but I think getting out there is the only way to get better!
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